Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, June 4, 2020
Writing the best Email
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Izzy
ReplyDeleteAwesome work on sharing your learning on your blog - well done!
I am also really impressed that you have embedded your slide on your blog too. It makes your work very visually appealing.
I also like the way that you started your email and stated what you were working on in reading. You have included many good points on how to write an email and I hope you remember all these things when you write one.
Keep up the wonderful work.
Mrs Carney